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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Wed Dec 10, 2008 5:11 am

I wish I could put that much time into making my characters, Cruxis. T-T I just kinda throw mine together as I'm typing and they never turn out very well. Creating something from nothing is not something I do well.
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Wed Dec 10, 2008 5:41 pm

Aaaaaagh! I don't like my character. Her history is just terrible. ;_;

So I'm going to take pieces of it and sew them together with a new one.


I'll have the bio up tonight! Sorry for taking sooooo loooong!
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Wed Dec 10, 2008 8:01 pm

Laughing
Its okay^^
I just got grounded...again >.< But it shouldn't last long.
Since this is Koro's rp as well, he can start whenever he wants lol
And Im curious as to how dmon's character and Cruxis' will turn out as well Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Thu Dec 11, 2008 5:00 am

aaaaaaaaaaah

I'm going to heavily edit this character.

Name: Libitina Asphodel

Alias (Nickname): Madame Bones

Age: 28

Birthplace: Terrycia

Starting place: Siborcor

General Description (describes physical appearance): Libitina’s face skin is quite pale. Her dull blue eyes and pleasant features make her seem frail, and a little sad. She wears her long hair up in a quick makeshift sort of way to keep it from getting her into trouble.She wears a short, thigh-high to be exact, form fitting black dress, with a belt on which she carries her sword. Tall boots that mimic the plain black dress almost reach the dress itself. There is about a five inch gap. Over the tattered boots and dress is an even more tattered and worn deep brown cloak. It is shredded near the edges and splattered with a variety of dried up liquids such as mud, and blood.

Personality: Since the massacre, Libitina has been in a perpetually melancholic state. She is relatively calm unless it has to do with her objective. She can be as severely intense as she is cool and collected which makes her seem to have a split personality. Libitina is soft spoken, and doesn’t like to raise her voice. When she does however, this is a good indicator that she is getting very angry. She hates to be alone.

History: Libitina Asphodel was born and raised in snowy Terrycia. She was taught to follow the rules above all else and to respect life, and death. The Asphodel family, like so many others, was a family that had many secrets. Odd things could be witnessed happening in or around their home and this always raised question as to what exactly was happening there. There was a cemetery in their backyard, but strangely enough, it was completely gated off and could only be accessed through the Asphodel house itself. The Asphodels were the town grave keepers, but there was a public cemetery for that. The private one was always suspected to be a family cemetery. There was a reason for this cemetery, however, and one of great importance at that: It was used to perfect their art.

When King Sigeli still sat on the throne, he sought the Asphodels for a certain reason. Most of the members in the family were capable of the strenuous psionic ability of necrokinesis. This ability was far and few between to be found. So, the king secretly employed the family. One of the King’s nieces had passed away, and he questioned the Asphodels if she could be brought back. They explained that even though they could bring her back, she wouldn’t have the same soul. Feeling a fool, the king decided against the idea in the end.. Thanking them, he paid the Asphodels a handsome sum and kept their secret. Three years later however, and much to their surprise, they received summons by the new king.

He commissioned them to bring back dead soldiers and convicts knowing full well they wouldn’t be the same. He just wanted mindless drones for his armies and workers. When the head of the Asphodels, Libitina’s father, declined, he had the family escorted out to a secluded area and executed for treason.

Lying on the ground in cold blood, she opened her eyes realizing she was still alive. Her life however was diminishing fast. Using necrokinesis on her own dying body, she was able to modify the encroaching death and escape. It was with tears she limped away leaving her dead family behind. It was their code. Vowing revenge on the new king, Libitina disappeared into the shadows of the Malarcana Forest. In this forest she found to her surprise freshly deceased bodies. Two men and one woman. Though it was against the code her father had created, she could not avenge them with the blasted apart limbs she now had. Removing her own right leg and left arm, she used her necrokinesis to attach the arm and leg of the woman’s corpse that lay before her. They didn’t match, but they were strong. The limbs were dead, and so at the very least, she could manipulate them.

Libitina eventually left the forest sneaking into Siborcor where she now waits, plotting her revenge. Her ultimate goal however, is to find a way to bring her family back, souls and all. If a way exists, she would find it. That she swore. She only hoped she would have the time. By using necrokinesis on herself to survive, a living being, she was slowly, and surely dying,.

Class (PSI type. Refer to descriptions): Necrokinesis

Weapon (if desired. Anything obtainable): The short sword is her preferred weapon. Her personal sword, Bieliy, is crafted with an ornate white guard and high polished steel with a mirror finish. A red ribbon is wrapped around the hilt in memoriam of her family.

PSI attacks/moves: Will add later.
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:19 am

That's really interesting Cruxis I love your character's personality O:

Also I may change to Aerokinesis since it was added later after I made my bio :'D I hope switching isn't a problem <_<

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sat Dec 13, 2008 1:44 am

XD
Amazing character Cruxis^^
and Im looking forward to any improvements^^Not that anyone needs any since everyones character is so well developed >.< *shot*

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:10 pm

Okay here is mine. I finally found the time to make it. Hope you guys enjoy reading. ^ ^U I hope you don't mind me omitting the sample post for now.

Name: Ruuka Rintouyu
Alias: N/A
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Danitus
Starting place: Norevion

General Description: The attack two years ago has left Ruuka with a horrible scar from her right shoulder to the small of her back. She doesn’t like people seeing it, so she wraps that area of her body in bandages. She’s also grown out her silver hair for extra covering as well. On her right arm is a fingerless white glove that reaches past her elbow with a pink ribbon at the top for security and a white fingerless leather glove on her left hand. She wears white tabi socks that cover her shins.

Ruuka wears a light pink skirt with white crosses embroidered in all around the lower edge. Her white blouse has no sleeves and leaves the tops of her chest exposed only to return and fit tightly around the rest of her torso. She wears a grayish mantle over all of this. Her eyes no longer shine the rosy luster they used to hold, for she is blind.

Personality: Ruuka’s never been that outspoken. In fact, her silence has caused dilemmas in her past. But, her silence does not even come close to matching the strength of her resolve. So strong that it could even be called stubbornness, though, she tends not to act rashly, but tries to play wisely. Lack of experience gives her a disadvantage in most cases.

History: Ruuka's lived a pretty normal life with her family. Well, normal as in no monster attacks or anything like that. She tended to stay inside her house unless she was working. A lot of her time indoors was spent in her room, sometimes with a book but most of the time alone. Her life was pretty boring.

That is, until about two years ago. Five days before her 14th birthday, she was attacked by large wolves while tending to the livestock. After successfully fending off these first wolves, she sent the livestock towards the barn.

A while after the last animal had returned, a last wolf struck from her right side. Not being able to react quickly enough, Ruuka was able to deflect some of the force away, but was still wounded from her right shoulder to the small of her back. With pain surging through her body, it required enormous amounts of strength and will to remain standing.

Knowing that its prey could not fight back, the wolf decided to toy with its next meal. It charged in, gave a small nibble, and backed away only to repeat the process many more times. As Ruuka’s body began to give out, a deep darkness enveloped the nearby area. When help arrived, light had returned, the wolf was torn to shreds, and Ruuka lay motionless on the ground.

Sounds of cheer and jubilee awoke Ruuka from her sleep. As her sight returned, she saw the entire village gathered outside her room in the medical facilities. It was her birthday. She attempted to stand, but pain jolted threw her body. The pain was not from any wound for it was too great. Soon, the pain subsided and she was able to join the village in celebrating her birthday.

From that 14th celebration on, Ruuka’s body has been plagued with occasional bouts of severe pain. Her eyes grew steadily weaker and weaker and now are clouded and opaque. Her hair has lost its red shade but has shifted into a beautiful silver color. She’s left her home and now travels in search of the cure.

Class: Dark Kinesis, Spiritual Perception

Weapon: Tri-sectional Staff

PSI attacks/moves: (I may add more later.)
Twilight Regime- I haven’t decided.
Dark Vice- I haven’t decided.
Eclipse- I haven’t decided.


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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 14, 2008 12:52 am

Awesome dmon Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:05 pm

It's nice to see that you enjoy her. It took me a while to come up with everything.
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:21 pm

I really wanna start soon, but I need Koro to give the thumbs up. Also, I think he should post first, since the majority of these ideas are his XD

EDIT: STARTED^^

@Goodfellow: Can you please lend a hand to Natalia? lol Shes in a bit of a jam >.<

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 16, 2008 2:19 am

This is my first RP sorry if this is horrible Razz

~Bio~
Name: Rey Sinfor
Alias (Nickname):
Age: 15
Birthplace: Danitus
Starting place: Danitus

General Description: Very deep brown eyes, and black hair. His hair is short-medium, but it is always spiky. He can never seem to do anything to it, but he never tries anyways. He wears a long blue sweater that goes slightly over his hands, gloves without fingers, long black pants with a vivid lime green stripe down the left side, that look kind of like jogging pants, and large, comfortable, bright teal shoes. Average height and weight.

Personality: When he first meets people he can be very introvertive, but that depends on the person. He is usually very jovial and fun loving. He likes to keep problems to himself, but he enjoys being there for other people, and likes to see that something he did helped someone. At times he can act very foolhardy, and can be very stubborn. He also has a temper, but there are only certain things that can trigger it. He enjoys eating and being around people.

History: He was born in Danitus, but being one of the few PSI users of the town, and the town being unhappy with the new ways of the country, he sets off to see what's happening in the world. He discovered his power when he was nine, when he accidently unlocked the lock on the freezer when he wanted ice cream and got mad at the lock. His power can sometimes be unruly, but he is pretty good at keeping it in check.

Class: Telekinesis, Telepathy, Remote Viewing

Weapon: He uses a gun that looks like a bow without a string, it is knarled, and evil looking contrary to his own appearance. The gun hole is in the middle paralellel to the compact sqare handle on the other side, that hold the trigger. the "bow" itself can also shoot barbs using kinetic energy. With lack of a better name, the inventor called it a "bow-gun" they are more of these used in the major cities then where Rey lives. (Is that alright)

PSI attacks/moves(may add more):

Kinetic blast: a burst of kinetic energy

Barb Rain: Releases barbs from the bow-gun and rains down on enemies

Telekinetics: Throws anything loose in the environment at the enemy with the mind(rocks, fallen branches, chairs)

Kinetic Flow: sends a flow of energy forward disorienting enemies and can also clear the minds of allies(is this alright?)

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 16, 2008 11:34 am

Excellent character there ShivKH Very Happy
You can start where you wanted to though if you want lol Sorry >.<

@Goodfellow: that was an excellent post^^ It may take awhile for a response, but I will try to get something up soon (I have very limited access Sad ) LOL

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:05 pm

Lol yeah i think i'll start there since it looks like you've already been saved XD EDIT: I added to more things to Class: Telepathy and Remote Viewing, is that alright?

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:34 pm

I made a change to my bio. ^ ^U I remembered the other class I wanted to put in there.

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:31 am

lol
GAH
I haven't posted in a long time
I will try getting something up soon guys. Im really sorry >.<

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