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LUKEGASM


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PostSubject: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:56 pm

~The Story~

(*NOTE: Most of these ideas are all Koromaru’s. I am just helping him in creating the rp^^ some of them are mine though)


Within the world of Ethor, people where at peace. There was no crime, no major wars, no suffering ever to be witnessed by any of them. Of course there would be the pestering bickering of opinions, but alas, that too was normal and common for them. No one was a stranger and instead looked at as a friend whom could use another to rely on. The king of it all, Sigeli Espinoza, ruler of Isomu and his kingdom,
Euphor, have made it peaceful to live. He was greatly honored as the best to ever come to the throne.

That is…until one day a storm of ominous winds blew into his kingdom. The storm quickly passed a day later but, not without taking someone down with it. The king was gravely ill and bed-ridden after the storm had passed away. With an incurable illness, all hope was lost as he grew more ill-fated by the day until he eventually passed away.

The whole world was at loss as their favorite king had now perished from a storm that just happened to pass over their home. However, the people of Isomu looked up in optimism emitting from the people was rising as they praised the new king, Prince Darvin to take up his father’s wishes. However, that was three years ago that wish was made.

Now, that wish is long gone as the peaceful world known as Isomu has been completely altered. Now the kingdom is merely a place. It has become a place under construction to become a wonderful city with a palace overlooking everything. New technology is made and implemented into homes as well as soldiers being forged and deployed everywhere, even though war is nowhere to be seen. This technology however, is still unknown as to where it has been found. Rumors have it to be sourced at Euphor.

Darvin Espinoza was beginning to seem like a power-hungry king, bent on controlling everything. But to his people, he was almost better than his father. He had brainwashed his people into thinking that his way was the only way to prosper and grow, when the only thing he was really after was power. As the days went by, the kingdom and the world slipped even further towards complete chaos. Its days of peace and happiness were drawing close to an end, and only darkness waited in the future. However, there was a ray of hope. Among the citizens of the land, there were those who were able to see past the lies and manipulation. They began to organize themselves and band together. They are now the world’s last hope to cleanse the throne.

~RULES~
1) NO CHARACTER CONTROLLING!
2) Posts must be at least a paragraph long.
3) No killing or severely injuring a main character.
4) Be creative! No one likes boring stories
5) No god-modding


~Locations~

*Euphor: Now a metropolis, this once old-age kingdom has completely changed. Everyone thinks of it as an improvement but the rising rates of crimes and violence tell a different story. The people living in the modern Euphor have become shifted into rude, heartless beings only capable of loving themselves and their king, Darvin. The city has massive towering buildings with all purpose malls to factories to schools built with the least of materials. The air in Euphor is now tainted with smog and harmful chemicals from the usage of burning fuels. The real whereabouts of how this technology was made is rumored to be in the core of Euphor.

*Itaia: A small town that serves as the checkpoint for Euphor. It is small with only a few inhabitants. Recently, soldiers have been deployed in watching who goes in and out of said checkpoint and random civilians have been spotted and reported missing. This is only the few towns to still have that village feel to it since it has remained unchanged. It has a linear path to Euphor with the only means of getting to Itaia is across the Mercernium mountains.

*Mercernium Mountains: A series of snowcapped mountains that consist of winding paths and ledges. Snow is constant in these mountains making the climate constantly cold. No animals used to live in the mountains but that was 3 years ago and now breeds of wolves hunt on prey traveling by.

*Terrycia: A transformed city like Euphor however, transformed in ways different from Euphor. This large city now composed of many buildings with inside heating; resides at the base of Mercernium. Since the snow is constantly falling here, people unaccustomed to freezing temperatures might find it hard to live in it.

*Amene Fields: A giant plain that stretches as far as the eye can wander. Like a resting place before reaching the cold city of Terrycia. The sun’s warmth has made Amene full of vibrant flowers in an array of colors. However, the field’s end advancing towards Amene is covered in sheets of snow making it an awe inspiring wonder.

*Malarcana Forest: A vast forest with only two areas to escape or enter from, one leading to Amene Fields and the other to Siborcor village. This forest has massive trees that block out any incoming sunlight only allowing small streams of rays to pierce the canopy of the leaves. The wildlife in the forest itself remains a mystery as most people haven’t yet to encounter any creatures since 3 years ago. Though, recent reports have declared that people have gone missing within Malarcana.

*Siborcor: A village right before leading into Malarcana. Three years ago villagers used to venture into the woods to gather herbs and flowers that only grew in the dark, damp forest. Now, no one ventures into the forest without permission of the leader in Siborcor. The town still has remained old-century like with cottages and the lot but within them contrast their little appearances. However the people living here are friendlier.

Bolosa: The 3rd and final major city. Unlike the other two, the people here are as nice as can be since it strays far away from Euphor. It is large due to it being the main town of trading and gossip and who knows what. It has four entrances, North, South, East, and West being north the long trail towards Siborcor. South leads to Danitus, the east leads to Norevion, and lastly, the west ends off near small farms scattered in the country side. The major city homes many residents and buildings of all sizes. It is also the only town to have a fighting arena that was built in the three year time span to entertain guests and visitors.

Danitus: The smallest town, it houses only a few dozen inhabitants but thus, produces the most heartwarming people there is out there. Small cottages are a vast here along with livestock and old-fashioned living. Unlike other towns, this one has stood true to its nature and hasn’t changed in over three years. The air is cleanest here.

Norevion: Similar to Danitus, the people here treat others with respect. However, a bit more outgoing and going along with the times, they ditched livestock and cottages to make way to be more rural then most small towns.

~PSI~

PSI: Within the world, everyone has the ability to use PSI, though, even with this extra function, they simply had forgotten about it. Though, since the three year time span, those whom still remember about PSI use it to help others or themselves. PSI is separated into three categories and can be used but only if the person’s body can handle the stress and energy drain from using the PSI. The more PSI one has the weaker they becoming at controlling it. Quite the opposite applies too.

First Person Psionics [I] - This type of Psionic ability is personal, as in it is useful only to the user:
• Psycho-metabolic abilities ("mind over body")
o Resistance to Pain
o Personal Shielding - To resist assault or external injury
o Accelerated/Guided healing
o Lessening mental instabilities

• Extrasensory Perception ("third eye")
o Precognition (seeing the future)
o Postcognition/Retrocognition (seeing the past)
o Remote Viewing(seeing beyond one's own surroundings)
o Spiritual Perception (seeing beyond the planes of this reality)


Second Person Psionics [You] - This type of Psionic ability can be interpersonal, as in useful or effectual against more than one person:
• Telepathy: Communication without the use of physical senses. ("mind speak")
o Thought Communications
 Discourse Projection (saying conversation without mouth)
 Discourse Reception (hearing conversation without ears)
o Image Projection (transmitting images into another's mind)

• Mental Persuasion ("brainwashing")
o Mind Control
o Mind Reading
o Memory Alteration
o Induced Hallucination

Third Person Psionics [Them] - This type of Psionic ability can be confrontational, as in useful or effectual against more than one aggressive person, or may affect target objects:
• Psychokinesis ("mind over matter")
o Telekinesis (Manipulating/Creating kinetic Energy with the Mind)
o Pyrokinesis/Cryokinesis (Manipulating/Creating Heat Energy with the Mind [to burn or freeze targets])
o Electrokinesis (Manipulating/Creating Electrical Energy with the Mind)
o Geokinesis (Earth Manipulation. Stalagmites, rock movement)
o Hydrokinesis (Water manipulation)
Aerokinesis (Air manipulation)
Necrokinesis (ability to modify or incur death)-produces great strain on the body
Holykinesis(manipulation over light. able to blind foes.)
Dark Kinesis(manipulation of darkness)

• Physical Sensory Projection (The ability to create images or even tangible objects in the physical world)

*NOTE* Most people tend to only have one PSI ability from every perspective (As well as sub-categories) which varies from person to person.



~Bio Format~
Name:
Alias (Nickname):
Age:
Birthplace:
Starting place:

General Description (describes physical appearance):
Personality:
History:

Class (PSI type. Refer to descriptions):

Weapon (if desired. Anything obtainable):

PSI attacks/moves:

Sample post (optional):

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:13 am

I'll join for sure. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 3:33 am

Alright Cruxis. Smile

Here's mine btw. Might change if you people deem it suckish.

Name: Allan Palmer

Alias: His best friend calls him Ally from time to time.

Age: 17

Birthplace: Norevion

Starting place: Norevion

General Description: Allan is a 17 year old teenage boy. He himself always wears long, concealing clothes, such as normal shirts and jackets, accompanied by the every growing new fashion of jeans being made. Allan has ebony colored hair followed by hazel toned eyes. Allan is ‘5’9’ or roughly 175.3cm. His build is an average size. He normally wears sneakers making it easier to run distances.

Personality: Three years ago Allan was the shiest kid in Norevion. He hesitated most of the time to speak and people knew that due to how timid he was. However, once the king had died three years, the new king Darvin had ordered his parents to be taken away and reposition in Euphor in which forced him to take reside in a neighboring family. Three years later, he had remarkably changed from his timid nature to be more outgoing and more open to strangers. This netted him a new found best friend Annie. Allan now lets his mind be heard from time to time if needed and is always looking out for Annie.

History: Three years ago his family was all caring and loved him very much. He was always timid when his family brought over strangers for dinner and to chat so he would lock himself inside his room. Once the king had died and his son took over, things took a terrible turn for the worst as this new king had ordered certain families to have their parents removed and be trained for army purposes. In turn, his family was selected for this and Allan was stripped and left alone to care for his home.

It was until a nearby family took him in since Allan was traumatized of losing his loved ones. It took a few months before Allan would finally return back to his normal self and accept the fact his parents weren’t coming back again. Though, this development shaped his personality from a timid boy into an outspoken one feeling the need to help others and debate on things that bugged him. Eventually this made his imagine viewed in the town change and thus, got him a new found lifelong friend Annie.

At the age of 16, Allan discovered the ability to use PSI(Psionics) by mistake when fending off an attack from wild animals that ran amok and entered Norevion. In an attempt to strike down the creatures with his metal bat to save his friend Annie, his bat had taken a frozen encasement and upon impact with the animal, froze it solid causing it to shatter moments afterward. However, only he and Annie witnessed this event deciding to keep it a secret from everyone else. This helped develop his PSI over the year discovering his other two latent abilities as well as Annie’s.

Class: Cryokinesis, Psycho-metabolism (Personal shielding), Mental Persuasion (Induced hallucination)

Weapon: Metal bat. This was a gift from his new family when he wanted to try out baseball. That was short-lived as he found that sport to not be something he wanted a part of but kept the bat nevertheless. It has proved useful to him.

PSI attacks/moves: Frozen bat: Encasing his bat in complete ice except for the portion he grips, he adds a chilling blow to his attacks. Anything that comes into contact with the frozen weapon instantaneous freezes depending on how much energy is put into this move. Freezing from whole bodies, to just the general impact. The frozen spot than shatters causing harmful damage to the skin or clothing or breaking apart the body entirely into pieces.

PK Freeze: Focusing on a single area, Allan can cause the water molecules floating around to freeze making the air around it to drop below the negative degree making it absolute zero in seconds. The smaller the area the more concentrated the frost becomes but it can become widespread, though, the temperature won’t be as frosty in that case. The ice fragments formed in that area then shatter causing harmful pain or killing it’s victims on the spot.

Barrier: Allan generates a hexagon shape panel in front of him. The panel is transparent and varies in size depending on the energy that went into forming it. It can grow or shrink once formed making Allan capable of pulling surprises at the last second. It changes colors depending on what makes contact on the barrier. The barrier is only capable of defending Allan from frontal assaults.

Hallucinations: Still very new at it, he can suffocate simple minds by generating illusions. Though, due to him only having to use it once, he still hasn’t mastered at all how to make use of it or how to even control what illusions appear.

Sample post: “Mom…?”

“Don’t worry son. We will be back soon. We just need…need to go somewhere.” The reassuring tone had covered the lies. The lies they told their son would only bring more pain. “I promise…we will be back.” Allan felt at ease when she mentioned the word “promise” because of how he could depend on it and them sticking to their word. This would only shatter his heart soon after.

“Just…stay here and be good.” His dad added to the conversation but was only going to make Allan’s heart soon ache with pain. Allan didn’t respond at all and watched them be taken away from their home. The soldier, wearing dark clothing, actually armor from back then when he used to visit the castle in Euphor, close the door and stroll off with his parents. Allan was left alone in his home. At that moment, Allan felt his heart ache.

It was only until a week later he knew they wouldn’t be returning. Allan had just finished cooking his dinner when a neighbor, whom had been traveling had heard that his parents were killed in a small ambush by various creatures when escorting a group of civilians. After hearing this, Allan felt empty inside. A part of him was torn from his life and all due to the new king wanting soldiers.

Weeks had passed since that day. People rarely saw Allan anymore and he neglected attending school. People would see him occasionally leave the house to buy food but that’s it. A family nearby had enough of it and decided to take him. To help take him from his denial, his emptiness, and his misery. To save him before it was too late. Successful, they took him into their foster care also achieving a child they could never have.

Since that day, Allan had to accept this fact. The fact he wasn’t going to see his parents again. The fact they were dead and weren’t coming back. He was going to have to adjust and he couldn’t deeply rely on others to get by. He needed to stand for himself which he had been doing in the absence of his parents. He decided he was going to bring that back out and fully adapt on it making it his new lifestyle. And then, with a passing of three years, he could see the changing of the wind.

Realizing, the world was taking a turn for the worst, Allan wished to address this problem with his best friend he had acquired after changing. This wasn’t about avenging his parents; it was about fixing the world to prevent it from crashing into total mayhem. The way the towns and people were changing was proof enough for Allan. With the acquirement of his new PSI powers he was ready for anything.

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 3:57 am

Okay uh I edited my moves. Let me know if I need to change anything.

Name:Annie Koch (omg thanks koro <3 ;D )
Alias (Nickname): Ann
Age: 16
Birthplace: Norevion
Starting place: Norevion

General Description (describes physical appearance): Annie's hair is shoulder length and black, she also tends to push it back with a white hairband. She is generally seen a red jacket over a long pink dress.

Personality: Annie is reserved and doesn't expect much from others. She doesn't care about what others think of her appearance and won't bother trying to fit in with everyone else. She thinks of Allan as a close family member rather than a friend due to the amount of time she spent with him. Annie will also tend to joke around about random moments that happened between the two of them at the wrong time. She will tend to space out a lot and have short term memory loss.

History: Due to the kindness of her parents, she was raised like an ordinary child in Norevion. She lived peacefully in Norevion for a couple of years with her brother older Raymond.Annie's mother had given her the Koch heirloom which was a Kodati blade, since on her side of the family it is a tradition to pass it down to the oldest female. She didn't really have a use for it so she just kept close for safekeeping because she knew it was something important. Around this time when Prince Darvin had taken over as King he had came and tried to persuade Annie's parents to join his workforce. They had denied him, and because of this Darvin had decided to murder Annie's brother Raymond. After they had killed Raymond they had decided to leave them alone because they knew that her parents would not cooperate with them. Raymond's last words to her had kept her spirits up and she would try her best to have a smile on her face. Although this was hard for her she had appreciated everything her brother has done for her and she had decided to be happy and optimistic in respect to her brother's death. Annie had easily coped with his death because of the amount of warmth that she had received from her neighbors. While she was leaving one of her neighbors' house; she noticed a timid boy outside of his home taking out the trash. She decided to ignore him because engaging in conversation at that present time wasn't fit and it would be too awkward. Two years later Annie saw the boy that was outside taking out the trash at school during lunch. She clearly remembered the look on his face that day although something about him seemed different that she couldn't quite explain. His expression seemed more firm than before and it looked like he had complete control over himself, because of this Annie was intrigued by him and decided to become his friend;which he had agreed to do. Annie had at that moment created a bond of friendship with a boy named 'Allan'. They had spent a lot of time together at school and they had fun getting to know each other. One day a horde of aggressive animals had invaded Norevion. Annie was powerless and she could not fight them. She was then cornered by the animals when Allan who had spotted her attacked the animals with his metal bat. His bat then froze and they had both discovered PSI by accident. Annie and Allan decided to keep this event a secret between themselves. Although Annie had only witnessed the power of the PSI, she too had gained the ability to use PSI from watching Allan manifest his.

Class (PSI type. Refer to descriptions):
Remote Viewing (weak)
Personal Shielding (weak)
Aerokinesis

Weapon (if desired. Anything obtainable): Kodati, which was a heirloom in her family.

PSI attacks/moves:

Visor Field: Scan the surroundings within a 30 km radius.

Acies View: This skill allows Annie to sense other people's presense from a distance, even though Annie possess this skill she isn't very fond of it and finds it irritating.

Warm Wind: A wind surrounds Annie's Blades and makes them more sharper allowing her to cut stronger objects.

Fantasy Mirror: An invisible barrier of wind protects Annie as a frontal shield leaving the back defenseless. It may occasionally reflect physical attacks due to her personal shielding attribute but chances are unlikely so using it for attacking isn't efficient.

Quasi Drive: Annie strikes the enemy 6 times with physical attacks and finish it off with a tiny tornado.

Quasi Limit: This skill shoots the tiny tornado from Quasi Drive without the physical combo.

Illusion Blade: Annie cuts the air and makes tiny blades of wind that are useful for striking and enemy from far, also includes target homing.

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 9:19 am

Wow. Those are really good guys >.<
I'll try finishing up mine now^^

EDIT: FINISHED: Its kinda bad and I wasn't sure about some things, but here it is^^

Name: Natalia Zendra
Alias(Nickname): Natt
Age: 17
Birthplace: Terrycia
Starting place: Terrycia

General Description(describes physical appearance): Natalia has light skin and thick bangs that hang near her eyes. She is almost always seen wearing her long hair up in a bun with loose wisps. Her eyes are pale lilic, and her hair is light raspberry pink. Her body is rather fragile, but she is stronger than she appears. With a slender body, Natalia is able to attract many “fans”. She is also always seen wearing a brown shirt with a pink floral pattern and a pair of faded blue jeans. (This pic is not mine >.< http://s365.photobucket.com/albums/oo98/AbyssGuardian/?action=view&current=1435456.jpg)

Personality: Natalia is very cute and charming. She is always willing to lend a hand to those in need and will never turn her back on someone who is in danger. She may seem frail and weak, but she is very strong mentally and emotionally, able to give the most helpful advice. Also very strong willed and refuses to give up, often landing her in tight spots. Three years ago, she was very shy and kept quiet, but as the years went by, she learned to speak her mind more often and make friends.

History: Born and raised in Terrycia, she discovered she had the ability o control water and healing at the age of 5. Since then, she sought to expand her abilities by seeking guidance from a wise monk named Hensai. Undr him, she learned to control both abilities with great skill, although her healing became the weaker of the two. For many years, she went down to the coast to train and hone her skills. When she was 15, her parents were killed while they were attempting to flee from a rebel raid, devastating Natalia in more ways than one. She began to isolate herself, refusing to talk to anyone, except for Hensai. After two long years of solitude had passed, the world began to change. Word had reached Natalia that the current king, a man by the name of Darvin Espinoza, was bent on starting a war and controlling everything. Soldiers became a more frequent image.

Natalia had decided that enough was enough. It was because of people like this that her parents were killed. She decided to set out on a journey. A journey to try and put a stop to the madness that had overcame the world.

Class(PSI type. Refer to descriptions): Hydrokinesis (Water manipulation) and Accelerated/Guided healing>>>weaker

Weapon(if desired. Anything obtainable): long sword

PSI attacks/moves:
-Frigid Waters: Gathers water around the target, then causes it to rush inwards, pulvarizing the desired target.

-Healing: able to heal minor wounds.

(Totally took this next one from Avatar >.< I will edit if you say no Koro^^)
-“Blood bending”: an art that has been strictly forbidden. Draws water from the targets blood, manipulating them. Natalia learned it from her master 5 years ago. Using this, she is able to control a persons actions or movement. Due to how dangerous this can be, she vowed only to use it as a last resort.

Water Whip: a long whip of water extends from Natalia’s sword.

Might be edited later. I need some more sleep. My eyes are like this: Shocked XD

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:40 pm

Can I add another type of kinesis? Aerokinesis, the manipulation of air?


EDIT: Or perhaps Necrokinesis?
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:55 pm

Sure^^
Updating~

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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:04 pm

Yay~!

Thank you. I'm totally using necrokinesis.
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PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:21 pm

Hmm...Let's see...

Name: Nuer Tikmin
Alias: N/A
Age: 20
Birthplace: Euphor
Starting place: Siborcor
Gender: Male

General Description: A pale young man with cloudy green eyes and (short) hair of white. He is thin from lack of food, but not so much that he lacks muscles or flesh, and is of about average height. There is an aura about him of constant fear, and his regular wide-eyed look of fear in his eyes reflects that aura. He has a persistent cough, a result of the time that he lived in Euphor, and has a strange habit of rapidly clapping his hands together when afraid. His clothing consists of a thin white T-shirt, over which he wears a long-sleeved, unbuttoned white shirt. He wears blue jeans slightly too big, and therefore has a black belt to keep them up. He is an agile and quick man when he doesn't come down with his coughing fits, possibly a result of his running when soldiers come around the village.

Personality: In short: Paranoid and phobic. In long: Nuer is a highly fearful person, constantly needing to look over his shoulder to make sure the only thing that's following him is his shadow. To this end, he'll always stand behind a person, regardless of what he/she tells him to do. His voice is a harsh murmur, when he does speak, and his eyes glance back and forth, never making eye contact. While he doesn't avoid people, he always stands a good distance away from them, and almost never starts a conversation. He'll jump at sudden noises, and even at ones he's expecting. So, yeah...paranoid and phobic.

History: For the first seventeen years of his life, Nuer grew up as a normal young man. When Prince Darvin took the throne, however, his parents were one of the few to speak out against the new King. Because of this, they were forced to move away from their comfortable home in Euphor into the frozen terrain of Terrycia. The sudden move caused Nuer to become confused, and he started to become more nervous around people when he realized that many of them could be looking for a chance to turn his family in. As more and more people fell to the King's brainwashing, Nuer's family continued to speak out against what they perceived as the unjust actions of Darvin. Again, they were forced to move away from their home. They headed for Siborcor, but at the edge of Malarcana Forest, soldiers caught his parents, and they were taken back to the Terrycia, judged, and killed. Nuer, however, managed to escape before they were captured, and entered the forest, where his extreme unluck caused him to be discovered by a number of robbers who were making their temporary home at the edge of the forest. Though stripped of nearly all his belongings, the robbers still had the heart to drop his fainted body at the Siborcor exit from Malarcana. After waking up, he made his way toward the village, where he resided for two and a half years and made his living off the kindness of others. Freaking beggar...

It was during his encounter with the robbers that Nuer unintentionally discovered the ability of PSI. The robbers' decision to drop him off on the other side of the forest was not entirely his own, as we shall see in his PSI category.

Class: Personal Shielding, Mind Control, Geokinesis

Weapon: A stick. He packs rocks around it when necessary, so it all works out...

PSI attacks/moves:
- Mind Control: Suggestion - A style of mind control that does not directly force the target to take the desired action. Instead, it plants the idea in the target's head, causing him/her/it to believe that the idea for the actions was his/her/its own. Because Suggestion does not force the target to take the action, it fails often if the target rejects the idea, whether because it goes against his/her/its normal thoughts, or just from natural not wanting to do it. Therefore, Suggestion is significantly less powerful than actual mind control, but is still usable when applied correctly. Nuer used this ability to get the robbers to put him where he wanted (unintentionally) and uses it still to acquire stuff from people when begging.

- Stone Steps - Raises rocks from the ground and packs them together to form steps upward. Mostly useful only for running away, as the rocks can then be dropped before a pursuant follow, though it's also useful against flying things. It could potentially be used to send someone up high as well...

- Surrounding Earth - Causes rocks and dirt to surround an object, packing it in. Very difficult to use with anything bigger than a small cat, but this is how Nuer makes sticks actually useful. Could theoretically be used to suffocate something, but as the time it takes to cover the mouth and nose is long, it's not very easy to execute. Also comes with a release ability.

- Earth Shield - Creates a sturdy barrier of dirt (just dirt) backed with a transparent wall that comes from Nuer's shielding PSI. Does not protect his back, which is very bothersome to him.

Sample Post: Don't feel like it...maybe later...

That...was...kind of long for me...>_>...
PS: If you're wondering about his name...it was going to be Neuro Tikmin, but I thought that the fact that combining his name together to get "Neurotic Man" was too easy, so I changed it to Nuer...=| Yes, I do like punny names...

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dmnoftheflames



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Number of posts: 13
Age: 16
Registration date: 2008-12-07

PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:02 pm

I'll be joining. ^_~

Since necrokinesis is being taken, I'll use something else. If I could make a suggestion, maybe light or darkness manipulation? But if not, I already have something else in mind.
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Robin Goodfellow



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Age: 18
Registration date: 2008-12-04

PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:47 am

Name: Lena De Morte
Alias (Nickname): Evil Eye De Morte
Age: 21
Birthplace: Terrycia
Starting place: Terrycia

General Description (describes physical appearance): Long black hair with red string intertwined into the strands. Not very imposing physically, only about average height and weight. Usually wear a long black dress (which is odd, given the weather) and a simple red cape/mantel. One of her eyes are brown while the other is filmed in white due to blindness.

Personality: Rarely speaks much outside of a few words of phrases, causing rumors of her being a mute. Very apathetic towards the world around her with little solid belief or attachement in people and the things around her.

History: Lena was from the De Morte family. By Terryncian standards they were little more than sneaks that endorsed thievery and hangs in Terryncia but there was never enough to fully condemn them over it. Up until she hit puberty, she lived a normal, sheltered life under the care of her estranged uncle Raithius, the current family head. After that, her powers began emerging, Like all things, it started off wonderful but then she began to realize with horror how little control she had over it. She could manage memory alteration well enough but her greatest vice was mind reading. She naturally picked up the thoughts of others whether she wanted to or not and couldn't shut them out, making her start questioning whether the thoughts she had were hers or the thoughts of others.

When Raithius learned of her gift he was instantly interested. He had her brought into meetings with his several clients and employees to learn secrets and who could be trusted. Many people she pointed out died. Raithius was even more ecstatic to learn she could alter memories and began putting her to use in cover ups. And with each use of her power, with each year she got older the more powerful her mind readings would become to the point she couldn't stand it. Between the voices she could hear screaming around her, the jobs Raithius would send her to complete, her growing lack of trust in people after seeing their true thoughts, and the lives ruined left in her wake she began distancing herself emotionally from everything. It began making things more bearable.

Raithius approved of her growing apathy and took the opportunity to begin introducing her further into the family business. He began giving her more active roles and had one of the cities best knife masters teach her how to use a blade. On one of those excursions, a man got away from a raid that Lena and a group of Raithius' men had done. When Lena was changing a witnesses memories she didn't notice he had been palming a knife and he slashed her across her right eye. He got away then but the De Morte's associates eventually caught up with him (that time Raithius made sure Lena killed him) but not before he began spreading further rumors about Raithius De Morte's new tool: Evil Eye De Morte.

Class (PSI type. Refer to descriptions): Mind Reading and Memory Alteration.

Weapon (if desired. Anything obtainable): A long knife called Rivenscry

PSI attacks/moves: She can tell where you are with the hint of a thought and guess your next move as you think it. THrough memory altercation combined with her ability to read minds she can shift through to your deepest secrets with enough time and erase the things that you hold dear. However, for memory altercation she needs eye contact.

Sample post (optional):

"Miss Lena? Your uncle wishes to see you," one of the maids said nervously. She had worked there for years and Lena merely noted her by the red ribbon she always wore. A wedding gift if Lena remembered right.

"Is-is that bloo-"

She briskly walked past her, shutting out the incoming thoughts.

Up the stairs, several doors to the right, was her uncle's study. He had several rooms, mostly hidden by conventional means, but he had a habit of coming to this one in particular for a smoke and a book in the evening. Predictably, when she opened the door she found Uncle Raithius skimming over a book on Sigeli Espinoza.

"Where is that wretch? The mission shouldn't take that long."

He looked up and a smile suddenly broke across his face. Closing the book, he said, "Ah, Lena. I was worried about you."

That's a lie. She thought, but didn't voice it. She never did.

"Rikash warned me things didn't quite go according to plan," he said smoothly. He tilted his head slightly as he studied her. "Lena, dear, please step closer."

Lena obediently stepped forward, unflinching as his hand traced over the folds of her robe. He made a click of disapproval as he clutched onto the long, ragged shoulder wound. "Careless. Did you leave any blood on the way home?"

She shook her head.

"Good girl. That's my bright girl."
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LUKEGASM


Libra Monkey
Number of posts: 375
Age: 17
Registration date: 2008-11-29

PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:46 am

Welcome to all new members Very Happy

@dmon: Koro said that light and dark can be added^^
Light will be Holykinesis= blinding
Dark will be Dark Kinesis- control over darkness

Any other requests may be put here^^

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dmnoftheflames



Aries Rooster
Number of posts: 13
Age: 16
Registration date: 2008-12-07

PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:27 am

Alrighty then. I'll come up with a character later. I've got a ton of homework as usual, but only two more weeks then I'm through! ^ ^ Yes!
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Cruxis
The Heretic


Aquarius Number of posts: 65
Age: 1001
Location: With Kuja
Registration date: 2008-12-04

PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 09, 2008 7:12 am

Almost done with my character! :O
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El Perro


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Number of posts: 61
Age: 16
Location: Doggy style
Registration date: 2008-11-28

PostSubject: Re: Atonement- Sign Up thread   Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:54 pm

Excellent characters so far. Interested on how Cruxis will make use of Necrokinesis. Wink

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