New YouTuber looking for feedback

Hello!  A friend of mine recently made a YouTube channel and has dedicated it to gaming content.  For her first project she is doing a playthrough of Tales Of Berseria with commentary.  I was hoping you guys could come check it out and give positive feedback, constructive criticism, and ideas for her.  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Kql8Ixu3dA